From 6130699ae53bde32a7c913f36f6e5fdfa5125b0e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dimitri Mitropoulos Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2019 15:45:22 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] removes extraneous trailing space --- README.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index b5ef9875..3410b9f6 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Docker containers. This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, and with over 8 million downloads to date, enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time compared with other solutions. -## Weave Cloud: +## Weave Cloud: [Weave Cloud](https://www.weave.works/product/cloud/) is software-as-a-service that simplifies deployment, monitoring and management for containers and microservices. It extends and complements popular orchestrators, and enables developers and DevOps to realize faster deployments, insightful monitoring, visualization and networking. From 16051a89b661539912ab3adb0d36fde8372fc966 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dimitri Mitropoulos Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2019 15:46:06 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] removes unnecessary line return which, remember, github's markdown parser is going to ignore anyway --- README.md | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 3410b9f6..9fd5368e 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -7,8 +7,7 @@ # About Weaveworks -[Weaveworks](https://www.weave.works) is the company that delivers the most productive way for developers to connect, observe and control -Docker containers. +[Weaveworks](https://www.weave.works) is the company that delivers the most productive way for developers to connect, observe and control Docker containers. This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, and with over 8 million downloads to date, enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time compared with other solutions. From 21bc724632f2b21ebc8b995723d11b59254d6ff5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dimitri Mitropoulos Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2019 15:50:29 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] breaks long sentence (with dangling subject) into two sentence ask yourself: does `enables` refer to `this repository` or `weave net`, and it should become clear that it's unclear at best. if you take out the parentheticals, it reads: > This repository contains Weave Net enables you to get started... breaking into two sentences helps smooth this bumpiness. --- README.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 9fd5368e..60985e62 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ [Weaveworks](https://www.weave.works) is the company that delivers the most productive way for developers to connect, observe and control Docker containers. -This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, and with over 8 million downloads to date, enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time compared with other solutions. +This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, with over 8 million downloads to date. Weave Net enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time compared with other solutions. ## Weave Cloud: From 0c2e046c8653c4528680ca3c753c6220ef34bf90 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dimitri Mitropoulos Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2019 15:54:55 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] makes passive voice more explicit --- README.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 60985e62..52847da4 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ [Weaveworks](https://www.weave.works) is the company that delivers the most productive way for developers to connect, observe and control Docker containers. -This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, with over 8 million downloads to date. Weave Net enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time compared with other solutions. +This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, with over 8 million downloads to date. Weave Net enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time required by other solutions. ## Weave Cloud: