From 21bc724632f2b21ebc8b995723d11b59254d6ff5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dimitri Mitropoulos Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2019 15:50:29 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] breaks long sentence (with dangling subject) into two sentence ask yourself: does `enables` refer to `this repository` or `weave net`, and it should become clear that it's unclear at best. if you take out the parentheticals, it reads: > This repository contains Weave Net enables you to get started... breaking into two sentences helps smooth this bumpiness. --- README.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 9fd5368e..60985e62 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ [Weaveworks](https://www.weave.works) is the company that delivers the most productive way for developers to connect, observe and control Docker containers. -This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, and with over 8 million downloads to date, enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time compared with other solutions. +This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, with over 8 million downloads to date. Weave Net enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time compared with other solutions. ## Weave Cloud: