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ask yourself: does `enables` refer to `this repository` or `weave net`, and it should become clear that it's unclear at best. if you take out the parentheticals, it reads: > This repository contains Weave Net enables you to get started... breaking into two sentences helps smooth this bumpiness.
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[Weaveworks](https://www.weave.works) is the company that delivers the most productive way for developers to connect, observe and control Docker containers.
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This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, and with over 8 million downloads to date, enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time compared with other solutions.
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This repository contains [Weave Net](https://www.weave.works/products/weave-net/), the first product developed by Weaveworks, with over 8 million downloads to date. Weave Net enables you to get started with Docker clusters and portable apps in a fraction of the time compared with other solutions.
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## Weave Cloud:
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